Chapter 2 - "I'll Handle It"
Credits
- Scott - Casey Harley
- Tony - Thomas Gunter III
- Producer/Director - Robert Melvin Lee Edwards Thomas Gunter
Scoring
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Comments
The first huge problem I notice is the audio. Its so difficult to hear everything, and the cell phone conversations don't sound very authentic. The next thing would be editing. Watch the jump cuts and use a few more angels to make things interesting.
Good job on the story though. Work on those aspects and you'll be a strong player!
I would work on the angles, as opposed to the angels, Jakus. They usually make for better videos.
I couldn't hear all of the phone conversations.
@Hans_Moleman Umm... I'm 99% positive that if he had some random angels walking/flying around, the submission would be twenty times more interesting....
What RoodieGold said
Hey, if you guys want I'm willing to teach you some camera techniques and editing skills before the next rootclip is due. Just ask.
This is the weakest of the five entries, and that is in spite of its violating the time constraint BIG TIME! Not much is gained by its going nearly 30 seconds over the limit. How does anyone KNOW ot call Scott, since he only got the case in the root clip by a total accident.? And the music is not at all matched to the shots and cuttling in the scene when Scott is "escaping" and listening on the phone. That music is more suited to an actual chase scene with cross-cutting and lots of short takes. And the scene back at the restaurant with the wallet. . .it just dangles as shown and placed in the chapter. It occurs way too late; and there is no real ending here. . .certainly not one to set up the enxt chapter very well.
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