UTK 2008 Fall Film Project

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Chapter 2 - "Sweet Dreams"

Voting ended 9/29/2008

Chapter 2 - "Sweet Dreams"

Submitted 9/24/2008 by TeamBlackRock
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by Allison Eskew, Nate Metcalf, Laura Travis

Scoring

Weighted Community Vote Weighted Judges' Vote Total Score
18.2%
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0.0%
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18.2%

Comments

9/25/2008 at 12:46 a.m. by DuSome

hahahah this crack me up good job joel is hilarious

9/25/2008 at 3:38 a.m. by JakusB

Where have all the cliff hangers gone?....

9/25/2008 at 12:46 p.m. by GOVOLSBABY

Very creative idea. Well written. Got my vote

9/25/2008 at 12:58 p.m. by ninecoon

riveting performances by the actors. Stellar producing and directing.

9/25/2008 at 1:03 p.m. by gagglegeeses

Ha!

9/25/2008 at 2:05 p.m. by Lindzees727

This one is definitely my favorite. Great Actors, well scripted...Masterpiece!!

9/25/2008 at 2:13 p.m. by greggit

Nice Editing... Good Story... Good Job... Leaves you wanting more...

9/25/2008 at 2:19 p.m. by Stoney

I agree I want to know more...

9/25/2008 at 2:49 p.m. by sarat33

suspensful!!

9/25/2008 at 2:54 p.m. by oernc

By far the most unique and creative video on this website!

9/25/2008 at 3:02 p.m. by rbrdlv

I can't wait to see the ending! Becky

9/25/2008 at 3:48 p.m. by ashkatgat

Very suspenful... ending should be good!!!

9/25/2008 at 3:59 p.m. by thisbetas4u

What is going on with the no pants? I still like it! Great acting guys! Nice twist to the story and it's exceptionally different from the other videos. Hats off to the screenwriter.

9/25/2008 at 5:16 p.m. by chilipepperdood

that's great!! hahaha... i laughed my ass off... dapper.. lol

9/25/2008 at 5:32 p.m. by ms11

I miss you guys! Great job!!

9/25/2008 at 8:58 p.m. by lilangel

Solid. I like.

9/25/2008 at 10:46 p.m. by hbvols51

I hope u guys win. Florida sucks

9/25/2008 at 11:30 p.m. by Billy_Miller

I thought that you all were trying to get around using the first chapter and I got crazy angry. (angry enough to kill) Then you turned it around on me though and the ending was interesting and relevant to the first chapter and I got all happy. (Happy enough not to kill) And remember the part in the middle when he had not pants? That was awesome...and then some. Very funny stuff and a great ending this was a really great job. Great.

9/26/2008 at 4:24 a.m. by chellebelleut

sweet guys, stellar acting joel

9/26/2008 at 8:55 a.m. by ChrisStone

I loved it! GREAT job!

FMIL

9/26/2008 at 9:21 a.m. by George

This rocks! Look out Scorsese...

9/26/2008 at 10:51 a.m. by jreeves7

Nicely done! Dapper production. El Pilo approves.

9/26/2008 at 4:06 p.m. by twelsh3175

Great Job guys! :)

9/26/2008 at 4:26 p.m. by MIstermatrix24

The ONLY reason im voting for this one is because i missed this submission period and i can still submit my video for chapter three seeing as this didn't move the story ANYWHERE.... But all the submissions sucked in my opinion..... the best one is "Kidnapped" but i don't like where its going.... Congrats you got my vote... but you don't get my respect for this junk

9/26/2008 at 4:40 p.m. by JakusB

HAHAHAHA... Mistermatrix24, since when did you start attending UTK?

9/27/2008 at 9:04 a.m. by krisinpa2

Verrrrry mysterious..GREAT JOB!!

9/27/2008 at 1:35 p.m. by Manny

Dude, way Cool... have been in that dream many a time!!!! Looking forward to great projects in the future.

9/27/2008 at 7:14 p.m. by SMRG

This was smartly conceived--I liked the back and forth between the actors and the whole concept of one character being antsy about a double date--it just gave a different angle and feel to the potential direction here. The dream concept was cool, it just doesn't further the storyline... It's too bad, I liked this one for it's creativity, but I guess I'm still looking for one that gets the story to progress...

Nice work, though--hope to see more from you guys in the near future. :-)

9/27/2008 at 8:42 p.m. by slowturtle

great video, my favorite by FAR!!!!! i've journeyed from afar and watched many films along the way and that has nothing to do with this but as far as this competition goes, this one is the best. thanks.

9/27/2008 at 9:46 p.m. by gth651t

this one was definitely my favorite.

9/28/2008 at 1:40 p.m. by dbandy

great editing guys, makes me look like not such a bad actor now ^_^

9/28/2008 at 3:49 p.m. by Boomhower

So it ends with the same cliffhanger as Chapter 1? Well , folks looks like we already know what half of the submissions for Chapter 3 are gonna be. THE SAME ONES! Shouldn't have just rewritten chapter 1.

9/28/2008 at 5:19 p.m. by rawrawtm

you wound up back in the same spot you started... not very creative. Two thumbs down. Should've moved forward with the story.

9/28/2008 at 6 p.m. by janewayne

well boomhower and rawraw.. yall obviously aren't very creative... they could always continue the story to where the one guy DOESN'T get kidnapped this time... since they know what's about to happen. or if they have any imagination at all they could take another direction. dont be so close minded. it's actually a very creative approach that they took on the first chapter.. great job guys!

9/28/2008 at 6:27 p.m. by JoeBloe

The actors you've used do a great job. Just would've liked another cliffhanger...

9/28/2008 at 6:58 p.m. by Robert_Twilley

Nice work. Dialogue is uneven, but thoughtful. Creative storytelling.

9/28/2008 at 8:29 p.m. by Bob_Legg

This was in my top choices. Creative story idea story idea. Needed some more variety of shots. Look at the continuity problems on the bench (people, paper, etc.). Could have been a winner with some more attention to the details.

9/29/2008 at 11:06 a.m. by aleagan

great job:O) VERY creative!

9/29/2008 at 1 p.m. by amy56

Want to know MORE, I like the way we got to know the characters without giving away the plot first, this could gone on for awhile!

9/29/2008 at 6:12 p.m. by TeamBlackRock

Thanks to all who voted. Also, THANK YOU to the actors,Joel and Derek. Make sure you all come back and check us out for chapter 3. I think we may have had a chance at this if we didn't have to cut over half of it out, which led to several jump cuts and an unnatural dialouge. Ultimately, my fault since I ended up writing a 4min piece. We shall not disappoint here in chapter 3. Thanks again, and congrats RENDER THIS! -nate