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Chapter 6 - "The Boss"

Voting ended 5/29/2009

Chapter 6 - "The Boss"

Submitted 5/25/2009 by TheCrew
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After the showdown with his mysterious kidnapper, Ben is told the truth behind todays events.

Credits

  • Ben - Shane
  • Mike - Joey
  • Terrorist - Joe
  • Boom - Marshall
  • Costume Director - Gee

Scoring

Weighted Community Vote Weighted Judges' Vote Total Score
27.1%
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20.0%
=
47.1%

Judges' Votes

Kayvon Esmaili | Producer/Director

I've gotta say, nice job on re-creating the previous chapter.. I actually thought it was the same film-makers for a second! Nice attention to detail, even down to the strange acting of the terrorist. Great colors, good looking shots and angles. I'd love to see you guys wrap this whole thing up in Chapter 6.


Sean Duran | Film-maker, photo taker, salt shaker.

Short and sweet, but not a bad entry. Ties up the story very abruptly, but at least it does tie it up.



Comments

5/25/2009 at 8:30 p.m. by TheCrew

This is really by The Crew, I just wasn't paying attention to what account I was logged into when I uploaded it...

5/25/2009 at 10:31 p.m. by JGutta

cheeeeeaaa boiii....we did madd good...ONCE AGAIN!

5/25/2009 at 10:35 p.m. by brittlynne

it was good. I liked the part where Joey hit the other guy on the head. that was kind of funny. =]

5/26/2009 at 1:58 a.m. by FungusRidden

The production values and performances weren't quite where the competition landed, but I do appreciate the immediate continuation of the story (and a pretty clear explanation of the events). But... where did Rose Petal go? I hate to be a stickler, because there were definitely a mountain of loose ends to address, but that seems like a substantial missing element. :<

It's gonna be tough voting this round... I like your spirit and plot direction, but Acceptable Loss performs strongly, regardless of what it is. I'll save my vote and ponder this further. ._.

Where did the other two go? It's not like Rockness Monster not to show up for a round. :<

5/26/2009 at 11:10 a.m. by jdemeere

Yay! You got rid of the postage stamp so good job on that. I think the sound quality for this video takes the lead. The audio levels of Mike could have been brought up a bit but it was still better quality than the other entry. The story worked but seemed a little too fast paced. I would like to have seen more production value for the final chapter considering it is the last one. It was a good job though. Good luck!

5/26/2009 at 1:26 p.m. by JGutta

yea the audio came out good..i kinda wish we had a little bit more time to work on it though..so then maybe the video could have come out longer...i mean ya its only a one minute video but it came out good i think...we did a good job for the time period we had..

5/26/2009 at 1:29 p.m. by JGutta

and ya the rose pedal kind of dissapeard but ya kno...it rele wasnt that big of deal it was kind of an add into the story..it still came out good with out it...

5/26/2009 at 1:30 p.m. by JGutta

hahah way to go jakus....dont give us n e credit and upload it under ur own name waiiiiii to go...hahaha just playin man,...

5/27/2009 at 10:42 a.m. by JGutta

hahah thanks

5/27/2009 at 10:20 p.m. by killerrobotninja

this one is pretty good. seems a little abrupt, but nicely done.

5/28/2009 at 10:23 a.m. by JGutta

why is it a lil abrupt;...

5/28/2009 at 10:33 a.m. by WAKEupJAKEup

joe as the terrorist makes this mad chill.

5/28/2009 at 2:52 p.m. by BohemianFilmCommune

I dig it! The picture is super clear, the pull focus as he walks down the hill is stellar, great job Jake! What did you use to pull the video clip in the desert off the site? I tried once before and got pretty weak results. I hear a quiet JakusB audio cameo at :13 ;) All in all great stuff dude, you keep moving forward with everything you do!

5/29/2009 at 10:36 a.m. by RamJVCoach1628

Nice Job Joseph

6/1/2009 at 9:25 a.m. by JGutta

ahhh we lost...thats iight tho....we'll get it in the next story!