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Chapter 5 - "not again "

Submitted 5/11/2009 by rocknessmonster
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things happen

Credits

ben - alex plumeau
guy on phone - jordan quick
hit man - james wise
jalaka taka knocka - tyler clark and james wise

Scoring

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Judges' Votes

Sean Duran | Film-maker, photo taker, salt shaker.

Not a bad effort, there was definitely a lot of good points.

Try to take a little more time with every shot, it will show when you put it all together. Glad to see some seriousness from you guys.

Alan Lastufka | YouTuber and Author

Great cliffhanger ending, look forward to the conclusion next week.

Cathy Baron | Actress

YES! Love your submission. It had an indie vibe to it that I really enjoyed. The music overlay gave it a different feel and you finished it off open ended. Good job with camera angles and the acting was great!

Kayvon Esmaili | Producer/Director

Response coming soon!

Libby Sherrill | Documentary Filmmaker

Great camera work, balance of CUs and WIDE shots. You did a good job building anticipation and suspense. Good music selection and editing. Did you add nat sound? Heard some birds chirping during roof shot. Props and costume are a little weak and acting could use some sharpening but over all nice job and hope to see you shine in the finale!

Comments

5/11/2009 at 10:03 a.m. by rocknessmonster

who posted the first comment, thats right i did o yeah how cool am i

5/11/2009 at 10:34 a.m. by jdemeere

I loved the part where the guy with beard was driving and laughing. Makes me laugh hehe. Good luck.

5/11/2009 at 10:49 a.m. by rocknessmonster

so the rocknessmonster finally made something thats not satire what a surprise hope i didn't disappoint anyone.

5/11/2009 at 3:18 p.m. by jordanQ

that was awesome, you guys should have that jordan quick guy on more often.

5/11/2009 at 3:22 p.m. by jordanQ

by the way you cannot kill jalaka taka knocka off, he is a great character

5/11/2009 at 4:36 p.m. by fiercedeityys

I'm proud of you rockness. Usually I don't hesitate to shoot criticism at you, but this time around I don't have much to give. Other than somewhat weak acting and a few jarring shot transitions, I think you're first "serious" submission follows the story nicely and does well with it. Good job!

5/11/2009 at 5:58 p.m. by FungusRidden

Best submission from you guys ever. I was feeling upset that there was no competition for this one, but your entry's completely solid and progresses the plot well. I think this is a perfect way to go into Chapter 6.

Well done, bud! Keep up the good work!

5/12/2009 at 5:50 p.m. by jdemeere

Hey I couldn't agree more with these guys. This was a great submission. I would have liked to get in on this but I got rained out on top of a lot going on (baby on the way, job changes). This was the best I have seen from you so far. I do like the other videos you have done cause they make me laugh. However this video puts a story together in your style that works great. Good luck to everybody on Ch6.

5/13/2009 at 5:37 a.m. by Ingvill

Ha ha ha, that one was great. My vote goes to you, and no one else (and thats not because you are the only submission (honestly))

5/13/2009 at 10:03 a.m. by rockness_monster

hey everybody check out these bloopers from the making of not again at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LATRBfLnD7w&feature=channel_page

5/13/2009 at 1:36 p.m. by FreakBeatlesManiac

Lol. That was funny

5/14/2009 at 4:17 p.m. by BohemianFilmCommune

I dig it, I liked the outtakes as well as it shows you guys were going at it, taking multiple takes, trying lines with different emphasis, etc. Killer! I'm rooting for you guys.....cheeeesy pun....but for real, I have a feeling you guys have this chapter aced

5/15/2009 at 9:14 a.m. by rockness_monster

yeah i really think we might just have a chance on winning chapter 5

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