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Chapter 3 - "Trespassing"

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Chapter 3 - "Trespassing"

Submitted 5/22/2008 by frecklestudios
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What if a dinosaur fell in love with a mermaid? If you want to find out, do not look to this video for answers. Tony and Robert try to recover the briefcase from Scott.

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Comments

5/22/2008 at 9:56 a.m. by killerrobotninja

some of those camera moves are impressive!

5/22/2008 at 10:05 a.m. by moviefanatic

"Is the salamander in the lion's den?" haha nice

I like the track shot

The next one sets up perfect for that guy to kiss him on the cheek

5/22/2008 at 11:27 a.m. by patrickbeeson

I just got deja vu from the beta Rootclip.

5/22/2008 at 11:36 a.m. by TheBigKlosowski

I thought this submission was very funny and creative. It fits with the funny nature of the chapter 2 clip, while taking it into an interesting direction.

5/22/2008 at 12:10 p.m. by wain

two thumbs up

5/22/2008 at 1:12 p.m. by cloudedsky

I really like this one!

5/22/2008 at 3:30 p.m. by klino

the best!

5/23/2008 at 11:20 a.m. by Cadillac

I was alright with it up until it was a phone in the briefcase. Ok, i understand where it was going, but we already know that he has looked in the briefcase in chapter one and then took off right away. Would you really take off if it was a phone in it?

5/23/2008 at 11:24 a.m. by dangerousdave

Cadillac has a point

5/23/2008 at 10:20 p.m. by FungusRidden

I'm not sure I'd like having the contents revealed quite yet, but of all the things to put inside, I was certainly caught off guard! The phone is unexpected and offers some unique possibilities, which is very helpful for inspiring creativity in the next round's entrants. Also, a good selection of shots and a definite cliff-hanger to end on. I'm afraid this one maybe got lost beneath all the chaos at the starting line and hasn't gotten all the hype it deserved... :<

Or maybe frecklestudios is biding time... 48 hours is a lot of time to wrongly write someone off in.

5/24/2008 at 3:32 p.m. by thepinkninja

Good job...

5/25/2008 at 3:24 p.m. by frecklestudios

Cadillac, when you're down on your cash as much as Scott is, we figured he'd take anything he could potentially pawn off. I understand your point, though, but it's something we felt wasn't too important to stop the story from.

As for opening it early, we wanted to avoid the briefcase as the primary agent of this storyline, because undoubtedly the last piece would then boil down to who thought of the best item inside the case. No fun.

Thanks for all the feedback! I wish we had the fanbase of The Wrong Guy or even Zombies!

5/25/2008 at 3:24 p.m. by frecklestudios

Cadillac, when you're down on your cash as much as Scott is, we figured he'd take anything he could potentially pawn off. I understand your point, though, but it's something we felt wasn't too important to stop the story from.

As for opening it early, we wanted to avoid the briefcase as the primary agent of this storyline, because undoubtedly the last piece would then boil down to who thought of the best item inside the case. No fun.

Thanks for all the feedback! I wish we had the fanbase of The Wrong Guy or even Zombies!

5/25/2008 at 3:25 p.m. by frecklestudios

Darn it.

5/25/2008 at 8:11 p.m. by Cadillac

I didnt say I didnt like it. and I see what you mean as far as down on your cash, didnt think of it like that. Not bad. Im actually interested to see what you guys do next week because I think You guys have a lotof potential.

5/27/2008 at 2:38 p.m. by ScoresEasy

I liked this one the most. What do you have up your sleeve for the next round?

5/28/2008 at 3:39 a.m. by cloudedsky

We'll see about that. We've got finals this next period, so it's going to be hard to get a submission in this time. Perhaps. If we don't (or if we do) best of luck to everyone!