Chapter 5 - "End Game"
The Monster's Daughter leads Dr. Frank and Igor to the infected girl but the full impact of the night's events come crashing down around the Doctor and Igor.
Credits
- Daughter / Infected - Mary Allen
- Igor Johnson - Brooke Lunsford
- Dr. Frank - Greg Lunsford
Scoring
Weighted Community Vote
Weighted Judges' Vote
Total Score
15.7%
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10.0%
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25.7%
Judges' Votes
No Comment
Comments
Nice.
you guys need anti depressants so you seem happier but you guys are pretty funny
i did not quite enjoy the acting as much and the lighting could have been a lot brighter the plot however did in fact continue the story so props for that
nice submission guys, i agree with elu about the lighting and rockness about the happiness, but good continuation of the story.
Funny, loved it!
I always enjoy what you guys do, and I know you always have a great attitude about your submissions. The music could have been a little more suspenseful, and the lighting was a problem.
For the simple fact you kept to the storyline, unlike the other entries, you shall get my vote.
Thanks for the comments! We're learning as we're going and IF we make it to Chapter Six we'll be much more energetic and we'll fix the lighting! Thanks again and good luck to the other two entries!
good luck to you too!
Yeh, I'm gonna throw you guys a vote too. Though I'm really not a big fan of your ending, I do appreciate how you kept with the story.
Loved it! Keep up the good work!
I can tell that you guys remain hard-working and enthusiastic about your entries, and it certainly helps inspire your audience! The other comments sound much the same as my own: dim lighting and tame acting really hold your entry back, and some sort of microphone -- even dubbing over in post -- is a must! But then, use your best judgement; if your next entry has a bit more spark in the acting, perhaps the lines will be easier to hear. :/
You did a good job working off of a difficult twist! Best of luck!
Thanks, JakusB, we had another ending but I felt like it took too much away from the possibilities for Chapter six. Thanks for the vote! Thanks, Fungus! I really appreciate the advice! We're working on the acting and I don't particularly like to act (Dr. Frank) but my brother is wanting to give it a shot cause he's a hoot and Mary loves it so we're all working to get better. The sound issue, I've got a mic now so hopefully my next project will sound much better and my freakin' light wouldn't work on the out door part. The sound outdoors was really, really poor because I had to try and remove a loud hum from the overhead street light. Again, thanks for the comments and we'll do a much better job on our next entry!
Love the blood.
great job!
I'll over look anything technical as long as the story is there and you guys have it, good job.
probably the best continuation of the storyline yet. Good work!
i hope you guys win!!
Ehh, it was a good run guys. I personally feel you had by far the best storyline. Luckily the new story will be starting up soon, so I hope to see you there!
Hey guys,
Thought you did a good job on this one. I can tell the positive progression of your abilities since your last entry. You followed the story from the last chapter perfectly and I loved the twist of the two women being sisters. I tend to be a twist guy myself. Even though you have received some comments regarding your lighting and audio I must say, it can be hard working with lights and audio outside...at night...with no budget...and a small crew...I could go on. We are fortunate to have some valuable friends in the production business that are willing to lend some quality gear when they know we are trying to make movies for no money. I suggest hooking up with a production house in your area and rubbing elbows a bit to score some free gear. It never hurts to ask. Keep up the work, it's all practice.
thanks! you guys had a nice video, hope to see you in the next story!