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Chapter 3 - "THE HUNT BEGINS"

Voting ended 10/20/2008

Chapter 3 - "THE HUNT BEGINS"

Submitted 10/13/2008 by gluns4d
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Dr. Frank and Igor search for the Monster but are they too late?????

Credits

  • Dr. Frank - Greg Lunsford
  • Igor Johnson - Brooke Lunsford
  • The Monster - Jeanne Lunsford
  • Screaming Girl - Maci Lunsford
  • Screaming Boy - Luke Lunsford

Scoring

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Comments

10/14/2008 at 9:34 a.m. by JakusB

Oh boy...

10/14/2008 at 10:14 a.m. by thorindul

i love how enthusiastic everyone in this video seems

10/14/2008 at 11:40 a.m. by dangman87

old guys!

10/14/2008 at 12:25 p.m. by davidmoon

Hurray for old guys!!!

10/14/2008 at 1:59 p.m. by moviefanatic

@ROOTCLIP WTF? It seems you guys have lost the edge, it feels like everything has fallen off.

10/14/2008 at 3:46 p.m. by killerrobotninja

nah, there are just more newbs trying their hands at it. I think it's a good thing. But I am dying to see something knock my socks off. Haven't seen it yet in this story.

10/14/2008 at 5:06 p.m. by aplusjimages

I have to say that your Igor looks pretty close to the Igor from the 1st Chapter. The audio is weird because I can hear Dr Frank, but I have a hard time hearing Igor.

10/14/2008 at 5:35 p.m. by dangwoman87

eww...i dont like old guys. their all smelly and sick. not cute! not like my dangman! XD

10/14/2008 at 6:24 p.m. by JakusB

I have a feeling theres going to a slew of videos that come in the last day. Lower quality videos tend to lead to more submissions.

10/14/2008 at 8:29 p.m. by dangman87

thank you dangwoman.

10/14/2008 at 9:23 p.m. by CoreeKee

I liked the variety of scenes. The actors stayed in character.

10/14/2008 at 10:08 p.m. by dangwoman87

np DM!! i luv that we have the same opinon! <3!!

10/14/2008 at 10:37 p.m. by gluns4d

Love it or hate it, we had fun making it and we're still learning so hopefully our Chapter Four will be better! Maybe we'll add a HOTT chick into the mix to take the focus off us "old guys!!!!" Hahahaha!!! Thanks for ALL the comments!!!

10/15/2008 at 11:50 a.m. by killerrobotninja

You guys had some cool locations.

10/15/2008 at 2:35 p.m. by Jester013

One of the big problems I had was the jump cut from inside to outside. I needed some kind of transition to get the characters outside. I liked the kids at the end. Nice touch.

10/15/2008 at 5:02 p.m. by FungusRidden

Got me with the kids. I was NOT expecting that, and it totally added extra credit to the entry. ;)

The pacing's a little slow and the episode was rather predictable, but it's good that you're testing the waters here. Besides, improvement comes quick and easily once you start actually practicing, and experiencing what works and what doesn't. I'm sure your Chapter 4 will be several notches higher just out of habit from making this one!

10/15/2008 at 5:16 p.m. by davidmoon

This entry has a lot of heart. Although it's a bit rough, I like it!

10/15/2008 at 5:32 p.m. by aplusjimages

I like the idea of not showing the monster by keeping the monster covered. Revealing the monster is going to be tuff because the line between good and bad is going to be very thin. I'm kind of curious as to what people will do for the monster or if it will always me a mystery being.

10/15/2008 at 7:54 p.m. by JakusB

@Fungus What do you mean by "Your chapter 4 submission"??? Are you assuming these guys arn't gonna sweep this round? ;)

10/16/2008 at 6:19 a.m. by TeamBlackRock

Shots were nice and clear! I have some problems with the flow of the piece. Maybe try some matching actions next time. All n all i have to say good job guys!

10/16/2008 at 2:56 p.m. by jaytaylorthe1

Next time think about using over the shoulder and reaction shots to spice up your camera angles. Also always try to take your comedy up to the next level. For instance it would have been funny to the monster just walk by behind them while they talked. You had good ideas and definable characters. Never use your first draft of a script. Write it and then put it away for a day. come back to it and look at it from a fresh perspective. HEY! Way to get people over 25, it made you stand out.

10/16/2008 at 6:44 p.m. by SMRG

I liked the fact that Dr. Frank was so oblivious to the monster's actual location. :-) Geniuses are so one-track minded. ;-)

10/16/2008 at 11:15 p.m. by gluns4d

Thanks for all the feedback! I look forward to making Chapter Four and we'll have a better film, I believe! I love this site! Seeing all your work keeps me smiling and wanting to do more! Good luck to everyone!

10/17/2008 at 12:50 p.m. by davidmoon

Great storytelling talent!!! However, you need to get better with the cinematography aspect to make it all flow better. If you stick with it, and seek to improve, I see you winning future rounds.

10/20/2008 at 8:08 p.m. by gluns4d

Thanks, davidmoon! I appreciate the vote of confidence! My brother and I love to have fun and yeah, I will work hard to improve on the cinematography and editing! I'm glad I found this site cause I'm learning quite a bit from everyone so THANKS to all of you for your hard work and best of luck to each of you in the next round!