Chapter 2 - "Let me be FRANK"
Dr. Frank and Igor proceed with their experiment...
Credits
- Crew/Writing/Editing - Crew
- Makeup/Switch Guy - Stephan Z
- Music - Kevin Macleod
- Monster - Don B
- Igor - Lee K
- Dr. Frank - Tony S
Scoring
Weighted Community Vote
Weighted Judges' Vote
Total Score
11.6%
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11.6%
Comments
I think this is pretty amazing. Very well shot, and the story is funny. It's slow on one end while they make pizza bites, and then it moves on the other end with the monster waking up. Only thing is I didn't get the end. But very nice.
Yah I didn't get the end either.
Suddenly there are so many entries--cool!
I liked this one. It was funny, there were some cute shots. I liked the fact that even when the Doc's monologuing the call of pizza bites is too much to ignore. The DH reference was good, as well as the concept he has a henchman guy (and the switch guy calling at the end to see if he flipped the switch). I liked the American Science and Surplus catalog used in the bathroom shots. You could have (maybe) had him turn it so it appeared there was an equipment "centerfold" to admire (probably a better idea if he weren't in the bathroom at the time--depends on the audience).
And I liked the title (why haven't there been more plays on the main character's name so far?)--although I would have wanted him to BE frank about something, perhaps even prefacing his disappointment in Igor's pizza rolls with "Let me frank--" and Igor chuckling and saying something like, "You ARE Frank!" Yes, cheesy, but would have tied the title in more firmly.
Nice work, though. :-) Good luck! Their complaints about the pizza bites were things most folks in an audience might chuckle at if they'd tried heating them ;-).
To be honest... I was disappointed, and found this more hit-and-miss than usual, Tony. :<
The pacing was a little too weak to hold my interest very well, and I found most instances of the music to be irritating. The segments with the monster waking up were superb; I wish the majority of the video had been more in line with those sequences.
Unfortunately, I did like your past films better than this one, even though this may be your best technical accomplishment yet. But then, I'm just being critical from the sidelines; you already seem to be getting a good response, and if you soak in the popular vote like you often do, it won't take much to put you into Chapter 6 $250 richer. Best of luck!
Nice job Tony! 90.3 FM,Ramapo Radio-Rock on!!!!
Why does Dr. Frank sit down to pee?
This rambled on a bit ... I got bored.
Okay....interesting! I too have to wonder why you were sitting down to pee, but whatever. Good video and technical issues. I especially like your demented laugh...very authentic! Good luck :)
Why, how do you do it?....
haha, this was great! very true to the first, AND GOD DAMN, PIZZA BITES ARE DELICIOUS!
I'm a method actor. Those pizza bites were actually still uncooked. For reals. I put 'em in the microwave and they came out awful lol.
@Tony haha, thats great xD
I like it, 'cuz it brings me back to the Frankenstein films, which are such fun..
We should make a bloopers reel.
You totally should, Tony!
Maybe I shall. Haha, there were some awesome bloopers with the smoke and stuff. Youtube post?
I'd recommend Vimeo. Better quality, better design, better community (fewer braindead commenters). And if it's sweet and the RC cats want to use it in their blog, they can dl it right from Vimeo.
Yeah I keep hearing about Vimeo... will have to look into that ^^
Vimeo also works with 16:9 nicely =)
You guys are really getting much better.
i like
Mush Betta - Eggsellant Moosick!
Tony you get better each time. Keep it up! JKH
Nothing seems to distract me like pizza bites, either. And the hot outside and cold inside is the worst!!
You guys did a great job keeping the characters in...well...character! Hopefully we can expect to see more from you guys in this story.