Chapter 4 - "Back In Black: Out of Time"
Santa's driving wasn't quick enough to outrun a smoldering plot twist. Special thanks to jerrycommahello for letting us take over the man in black!
Credits
- April O'Neal - Nikki K.
- Ryan Brown - Tony
- KC Jones - Lee K.
- Motorist - Dan P.
- Man in Black - Stephan Z.
- Goremaster General - Tim Pagano
Scoring
Judges' Votes
Stylish and entertaining, with some intriguingly gonzo twists and a superb cliffhanger, this clip has a scruffy apocalyptic vibe that holds our attention even though it's a bit too long. Plus that corny black trenchcoat makes a return appearance, even though it really shouldn't.



Comments
OUTATIME??? Where's Doc Brown?
ok, i have some questions about people living inside watches, and wrists breaking without enough pain to make a person say uncle. but let's get the really important stuff out of the way first, where the crap did you get that rocket launcher?
I have to admit to being gravely disappointed when Doc Brown was nowhere in this entry. You have no idea how excited I was at the prospect.
But, I super-duper appreciate the stunning twist you guys attached. This direction is unusual and enticing to me; it offers a lot of creative potential for the story. The execution was pretty good, although I'm sure your next entry will clean up the weak points and build on your strengths.
Over-all, excellent entry and clever diversion from the plot. Voting may be extremely close this round!
PS: Yeah. About that rocket launcher. Is that home-made, or did you actually come up with one somewhere? o_o A+ on that prop work.
Hahaha I'm glad you liked the rocket launcher! We built it ourselves; it was the most expensive part of the damn shoot lol. We didn't have the budget for christopher loyd, i'm very sorry !
there were a few bits i'd change (like the watch phantom zone thing), but i liked the angle on this story. good ideas for the story's direction.
"I hate musicals " ,very nice pick up from the previous video . Your effects and music were great .I was going to rip on you for the use of that notebook but then I noticed it was shown in the first video , so congrats on picking up on something no one else did . Great video left a lot of choices for follow up video .
Good luck XD ps. How much did it cost to build?
glad I wasnt the only person that caught the Phantom Zone refereance. Makes me feel good about the future of America, lol. I thought it was great. Good luck guys.
Thanks; The rocket launcher cost about 30 bucks or so to build got a deal at the 'depot of homes lol
This is a good submission, but I feel it would have worked much better earlier on in the story. Theres only two chapters left, and you've thrown in 2 (3 if you count who hes on the phone with) new characters who are going to require lots of explaining. Whats the deal with the watch, why'd he blow up the truck, whats in the book, whos he talking to on the phone, who is HE, whats happening to Ryan, whos he riding with, the list goes on and on, and theres only a max of four minutes left to explain all of this.
I'm not saying this isn't a good submission, I think its great, but I just think its a bit too late in the story to be introducing quite so many questions.
HAHAHA....Oh JakusB. Good job on trying to win....
Good job on this. Way to come in and give JakusB a run for his money. Kick @$$ rocket launcher! What an excellent twist. Making April the reason for the attack, genus. But, you took it SCIFI!!!!!!!!!!!! ugh! I hate you for it. We just had a SCIFI movie. NOT AGAIN.
freakin awesome loved every part of the clip it is also the most creative and will have lots to look forward to
Sorry, I forgot to mention the flux capacitor cameo @56sec, and during fight scene (Near the telephone pole) lol
I'm gonna have to agree that this one introduces wayyy to much for the time thats left. And why the hell was she trapped inside his watch?
You saw the beam, right? :PP
Adds to much? That's a laugh. How do you see this story wrapping up without any addition character or plot development. Quit making BS excuses to covertly promote your own picks.
This video is great while also moving the story forward and setting the stage for an epic finale.
yea dude if you cant think of a way to get past that you dont have much adaptability . even if you dont have alot of actors you can start your shot out without showing the driver of the car and the man on the phone can be just that....a man on the phone .oh lets not forget the MIB he can trip fall die the watch breaks and then bam1 your back inyour comfortable bubble jakusb with all your original characters and a chapter to go...(cough hack cough) .
Everyone has a right to an opinion, even if they have a competing submission.
This video is campy nonsense. But, it does move the story better along than any of the other clips.
Tony...You lay on the ground so awkwardly when the Man In Black knocks you out lol
It's good to defend your video, but play nice! T_T
We certainly do need to start tying up ends, but that's not a grading criteria I would pin against any single video. I thought the watch was an excellent move for livening up the story. I'm glad to see that this one is continuing to stand out now that votes are being cast. :>
I haven't said a word to defend everyone else has I always play nice
and why is it that this site doesn't show when I press enter it doesn't create a new line lol wtffffff
And yes, I do lie on the ground quite awkwardly. I do that in real life as well as in movies.
Haha, sorry. I didn't mean to be offensive. Really! I meant this submission would have been so much better earlier on because it would have given more time to explain in this clip everything fully. @ jhonnyonthespot- I never said its not possible to do, its just harder to create a quality explanation for everything in four minutes. Once again, I apologize if I at all seemed hostile/mean in my last video, I'm all about playing nice too.
Edit: explain everything in this clip fully
in my last comment
I need to stop typing fast, lol
Those effects were 'special' in the "Oh, look how hard they tried" sort of way. Seriously? This is winning? I'm glad there are judges.
@ jhonnyonthespot, don't be such a nancy. If people couldn't come on here to criticize and defend the video's this site wouldn't be half as interesting as it is. What on earth would Davidmoon do with his life!?! ;)
Hold on, george lucas and ILM owe me a favor, ill get them on the line for next time lol
EXACTLY!!!
That watch effect reminds me of the old Sid and Marty Krofft kid shows from the 70's. (for those who remember the 70's) It's very Electra Woman and Dyna Girl-like (Youtube it, whipper-snappers)
I can't wait to blow you away in round 5! We got praxis and jaytalorthe1andonlyvirgin over here .This video is far better then what I've seen up, and don't hate on this kids effects cause you can't do any .As far as I've seen this kid is the only one that even has effects. I guess its hard to compared to" hey lets run and film running can we get more running" . Thank god there are people who can see to vote .How about a plot NANCY !
@ jhonnyonthespot
Was that English?
No it bad film maker your fluent correct?
I am a fimmaker not. The community, I like. My reviews I offer.
HMMMMMMMM~
On go the boxing gloves ;)
Ding,ding ... who's fighting?
Sorry I'm on my period. Nothing against you moon your reviews always seem fair ,I just get tired of people who can't see a better video ...and have a loud mouth or since we are typing forearm strenth(I wonder how they got that). I'm takin a midol peace for now
Um, OK.
I think this film, although campy, has the right formula for a winning clip. It's a mixture of cheesy effects, over dramatic acting, varied action and an ending that makes you wonder, what's going to happen next?
The beginning is very clever, with a good transition from the previous winner.
For the record, I think any (and all) veteran community members can clearly agree KRN is the best visual effects person around. Maybe you should go look up the history of this site and its past entries/rootclips before you say nobody uses visual effects.
On a side note, I hate it when new people to the site bring in a bunch of troll-friends. I don't mind new people joining up to submit entries, but they need to keep their trolls on a leash so they don't ruin the community. Shiesta!
KRN is the king of the formula I mentioned above, but he does it with more polish than anyone I've seen here. But that's not to say, that someone could come along and blow his work out of the water. And, his efforts didn't always yield a winning clip.
I like the troll friends. :)
timemachineforhire.com <-- haha!
Do you know how much leashes cost? It's alot! I don't have that kind of money!
Want to borrow some rope?
have to treat trolls with respect you know lol and they don't like rope
I think the explosion in "True Colors" used way better special effects than the ones here. Sorry! A little too cheesy for me!
@ jhonnyonthespot
Its wonderful if you want to defend a video, thats great, just try not to take pot shots at other videos and community members while your at it. There's a time and place for all effects, and I felt my video did not need any. All the effects used in this entry are not that hard to do. The the first couple involve using corn syrup and die (or detergent or w/e), the purple ray is created by duplicating the footage, adding some color effects, and then creating a mask for the ray, and then another mask of her. The watch effect is created by creating another mask over the center of the watch, shrinking the April footage down and putting it into place. If Tony wanted to be really tricky, he could have Motion Tracked the watch and applied that to the April footage, rather than just taking a still frame of the watch.
Also, I think all of the submissions show a PLOT. And three out of the four submissions are also first time submitters, so relax a little and settle down with the attacks. I guess we found someone to fill Rockstar Productions place... And once again Tony, nothing against you.
All the clips are quality and have a unique style. It's obvious that a lot of thought and time went into each. From past first time entries. they only get better with each submission; so keep it up.
And remember, there is a pretty stringent time restraint on these clips - if you are going the scifi route, cheesy will happen!
cheesy is my middle name.
As per the post above, that's the kind of trolling I'm talking about. Why bother creating an account name and profile just to take shots at other community members?
but... you know... it's funny... get it? cheesy?
I have no problem with you simply making fun of KRN via your name, but when you make a profile deliberately slamming him personally, it's a tad irritating.
killeretc.....don't you have better things to do with your time on a Saturday morning?
mmm... i think i saw some blue cheese in there
Dude , no one is dissing krn , when I said no one used them I ment this time round . And I am todays seeing some of the vids more clearly . I like this vid the best and that's my opinion , I came to it based on the fact that it picked up from the last as really I didn't think the others did . It can be argued that they were waiting for others to, but it happened in "the videos world" a second ago you might make a refrence like what was that car explosion even if you don't wrap it in a neat bow and explain it . Also mad props on that bazooka and the notebook from the first video. And when I said something along the lines of the otheres needing plots , you do have to admit they all seem cut from the same cloth . Not exactly the same but the april chick is just a prop . The dif being in the 3 one has a lot of running but great color and sound ,another has them trolling for tail but kept me watching waiting for them to ape april , and the last is my second favorite which puts me off just really at the end with the corny jostling of the hair type stuff ...but MP's will do that to you don't ask don't tell ....really satilites hmmm
Rape* april not ape her I don't know what that would be , maybe skinning her and turning her into some sort of sick halloween costume
wow, you're super weird.
Weird ...no I jhonny hernandez lol and I prefer outside the box
/hides
The IQ level on this site just hit under 100. Lets be nice to other.
I'd like to rename all of these videos please:
"Back in Black" is now ... "Don't Hate Kids Effects, Cause You Can't Do Any" "True Colors" is now ... "Tight Till Half Way" "Unwelcome Help" is now ... "How About a Plot, NANCY" "Homerun" is now ... "Trolling for Tail"
David Moon ftw I love this guy , I lol'ed out loud . Fyi that means I screamed lol .very funny!
lol im down
Hi, I'm Tony's friend and I helped create this video! (My name's Lee, I also play KC)
This is technically our third video, and only the second where I was in the "pilot" seat during the editing process. So, all criticism is welcome, especially the detailed kind, or any tips, advice, etc.
I know the effects used aren't particularly difficult to do, and I don't think we should win just because of them. We didn't start with a cheesy effect and then look for a place to fit it in; we developed the story-line and had to find some way to convey it.
(I would have liked to motion-track the watch, but we don't have enough experience with after effects and didn't have time to learn. The shot ended up being so quick we decided it didn't matter and our time would be better spent elsewhere.)
And sorry for the trolls! We told literally EVERYONE and there are unfortunately some overzealous people among them.
As always, we had a lot of fun making this and learned a lot in the process. Thanks to everyone who choose to vote for us!
mad props this ones a keeper :D XD
Wow. A lot happened real fast. This is intense. 'True Colors' took 2nd, and someone has stepped up and taken Rockstar's place on the @$$ thrown. I think I might need to start watching what I say a little more, Is it me or do I tend to start a lot of arguments.... @ jhonnyonthespot, Look man, I didn't mean to set you on a rampage. I'm sorry I offended you, I didn't think calling you a nancy would excite such anger in you. @ fiercedeityys, HAHAHA......trolls...... that's really funny! @ killercheesyninja, This is just bad taste.
nothing like a good old flame war Don your fire retardant suits
In my spare time I pretend to be a fireman, I'm ready!
lol... the cheesy ninja has bad taste
this video is my favorite this round
Great job to everyone who submittied a video. (Those who did, at least tried) All of this is amazing for me to see, since I couldn't do any of this!! Good luck to "Back in black", I think you did an awesome job. Can't wait for the next clip that you submit.
Even though the whole cracking of the wrist made me cringe I would have to say that the blocking has to be worked on. If you don't know what blocking is it's putting the camera at an angle so that way punches and what not in a action sequence look real, but of course the are not real. One other thing is that the cigar shots could have been shortened. You seem to just be getting shots of it. When you get a lot of shot of a certain subject it usually means to put meaning and purpose on that subject for the subject. Other than that this is pretty good movie. Best of luck to you :D
wow, did we just passed the rock Star productions test? lol I was worried that you weren't going to be around to critique ours. thanks for stopping on by, I really do appreciate a very honest opinion. As for the cigar stuff, we just kind of thought it was badass, not so much important. we wanted to show that he was a badass, as well is getting a few ground shots of the rocket launcher. thx
OMG -- The second coming of ROCKSTAR!!! I should have seen this coming.
"In the contest of moving images, that awards coin or receives ridicule, the great star of rock will return to seize his throne promptly on the eve of a laborious celebration ... " - Nostradamus
lol Moon citing Nostradamus oh my
He Has Returned! Let us sing and rejoice!
"There's a man going around taking names and he decides Who to free and who to blame every body won't be treated Quite the same there will be a golden ladder reaching down When RockStar comes around..." -Johnny Cash
"And guess who's back, No longer trapped, Cuz, I snapped on the one that held me back, feeling contact, ride the track, get a grip as I flip, get a licking as I kick, Guess who' back ... Yes I'm back ... Rockstar is back." - Tupac
Ok ok. Calm down. I almost submitted to chapter 3 but the movie was 2 and a half minutes. Oh well. I wont be submitting to root clip any way anytime soon. So ill be here to just watch all these videos.
Hey, throw that up on YouTube ... I'd love to see it. :)
HAHA Love the motorist. Love how he says his line! I'm surprised that april survived being hit by a car, going through a 2 minute musical, and being sucked through a watch. Thought she would have died by now. For my ch 3 submission I had KC ditch Ryan to save him self and then have Ryan try to carry April to a Hospital. But then Ryan sees a helicopter in the distance coming towards him and so he assumes it is coming to drop yet another bomb. So they run and find shelter from the bomb and then Ryan leaves April in a room to check out the after math of the explosion. While he explores he finds that KC and a "terrorist" come out of a building (from shelter) and the terrorist Has KC in cuffs being taken away. Then Ryan runs back to get April but then he finds that she is gone. Oh and did you make the rocket launcher out of PVC pipe Tony?
YA I will try. I'll probably post it on facebook though. I dont have a You tube account.
We presumed April dead after round 2, but FungusRidden brought her back so we thought we'd run with it :)
Try to post your vid somewhere rockstar! After the work you put in, it should definitely be shared. It was difficult to cut ours down to 2 minutes, actually, so we can relate.
Rocket launcher is PVC, black spray paint, and LOTS of glue!
lol You forgot caulk; the thing that screwed us over; apparently whenever you pump something full of caulk; it never dries; ever; Even when you put a hair dryer on it for hours
Don't they make adhesive especially for PVC?
yeah, but it's expensive lol and we thought caulk would work xD
Rockstar, you should definitely post it somewhere, don't want to let it go to waste
AR & friends are really great !! Keep up the great work !! elnu01
this isnt very good....
@ dibbleb478 have you seen the others...
It's awesome that any video, even the one in last place could still potentially win. I don't know if the praises have been sung yet, but this new voting system is excellent imo. Great going, RC.
I was skeptical about judges, but they've really been diverse in their picks. Bravo Rootclip!
Great work
An awesome video clip, with some especially convincing performances by the man in black and the chicklet. The dude doing the running wasn't very convincing though; he wasn't motivated enough - maybe he needed to run faster or something
dude thats the best thing ever it would have been cooler if it showed the musical people blowing up though